DNF Early Review – The Faithful Dark (The Brilliant Soul Duology, Book 1) by Cate Baumer (3/5 stars)

Reading Level: Adult
Genre: Fantasy
Length: 416 pages
Publisher: Hodderscape
Release Date: February 19, 2026
ASIN: B0DZ243W7W
Stand Alone or Series: 1st book in the Brilliant Soul Duology
Source: eGalley from NetGalley
Rating: 3/5 stars

“In a holy walled city where sin and sanctity are revealed through touch, Csilla – a girl born without a soul – is worth little to the Church that raised her. But when a series of murders corrodes the faithful magic that keep the city safe, the Church elders see a use for her flaw: she can assassinate their prime suspect, a heretic with divine heritage, without risking the stain of sin.

The heretic, however, makes Csilla a counteroffer: clear his name by helping him catch the real killer, and he’ll use his angelic gifts to grant her very own soul. Meanwhile, ruthless Ilan, desperate to earn back his position as Church Inquisitor, sees the case as his chance at redemption: he’ll bring in the murderer – or, failing that, Csilla and the heretic – and regain his title.

But as the death toll rises, and their hunt pits them against the all-powerful and callous Faith, Csilla finds herself torn. Will her salvation come at the cost of everything she believes in?”

Series Info/Source: This is the first book in The Brilliant Soul Duology. I got a copy of this on ebook through NetGalley.

Thoughts: I enjoyed the atmospheric writing and the intriguing world here. This is a dark world, and the city we spend our time in runs off of religion, and not in a happy, positive way. However, the lack of any engagement with the characters and the slow pace of the story had me constantly putting this down. I ended up giving this up at 40% of the way in (adding to my rather large DNF pile so far this year).

The story follows two points of view. The first is that of Csilla who has been trained by the church as Mercy. She goes out into the city and helps the poor. She also doesn’t seem to have a soul, which makes her lesser in the eyes of the Church. She is tasked with the job of poisoning a troublesome religious rebel, something that goes completely against the healing nature of a Mercy but feels she has no choice but to comply. The second POV is that of Ilan, who is a church Inquisitor. Ilan has a fondness for order and torture but is slowly loosing his status within the church. With a serial killer on the loose in the city and the seal failing, Ilan is trying to root out the source of this evil without loosing his coveted position of Inquisitor.

Like the last book I read, I really struggled with the characters here. I just never engaged with them or enjoyed them. Csilla comes off as incredibly naive, I know she is supposed to be gentle and caring because she was raised as a Mercy. However, you can be those things without being naive. She has been going out and caring for the sick and injured for years; you would think she would be more worldly. Ilan, the church Inquisitor, is an intriguingly complex character but was also very creepy. Then there is the Izar, who is part angel and comes across as a creepy and manipulative jerk.

While I did enjoy the serial killer mystery in this, I was frustrated at how unfocused the story was and at how slow the pacing was. Are we trying to solve Csilla’s lack of soul?, are we part of an insurrection?, are we solving a series of murders?…who knows. This is more a soap opera about these characters rather twisted lives than it is a good mystery. In the end, the slow pace and wandering story was not for me, and I stopped reading this about 40% of the way in.

I did enjoy the setting here and this dark religious city steeped in tradition and lore. There is a lot about angels and demons lurking around the edge of this story, but all of that never seems to become a big part of the story. The serial killer leaving demonic messages on bodies was intriguing but kept falling to the wayside throughout the book. I just didn’t have the patience for this.

My Summary (3/5): Overall this book has some strong points; I loved the dark and atmospheric setting and this darkly religious world hiding from demons. Some of the plot points were intriguing, like the serial killer on the loose and Csilla’s lack of a soul. However, I did not enjoy the characters, felt like the story was poorly paced, and that the plot wandered a lot. I also just don’t generally like stories heavily based around religion. If you are looking for a dark fantasy that focuses on religious corruption, you might enjoy this. It just wasn’t for me.